Judged

I’m writing this in frustration,
Can’t you feel my pain,
Do you feel like it’s your job to make my life miserable every fucking day?

And the answer is yes im hurting deep with in,
Its not just because of you.
Can you see all the scares in my writing.?

And no you couldn’t get a better picture of me if you met me first hand,
Because all that I am is in this ink,
This ink is all I can ever be.

And im not going to care what you think of this rhyme,
because honestly it has nothing to do with you.
I don’t think it came from your mind.

All you do is read it and judge it ,
Regardless of the point,
You bitch and moan about the grammar
and that the lines aren’t in place all the time.
Yes I know your right!!!
But this isn’t your rhyme..am I not right?
Go get your own ,
And ill let you know what I think ,
The same way you did to me.

I don’t mind your criticism ,
I welcome it most times.
Just this once could you ignore my punctuation.
Don’t worry about the spelling,
Just read what’s its about,
and what im trying to say this time.

But its not going to matter to me,
If you only give me one star this time,
and write me a nasty line,
I’m not going to give a fuck one bit, it served its purpose,
Did you get what I meant?